Moma’s Plea

10 thoughts on “Moma’s Plea”

  1. Oh my god, Little Clouds. That would be my worst nightmare, if my son went away and didn’t keep in touch. It does happen and it must be the worst thing. You captured it well. (There are a couple of missing words here and there, just in case you wanted to fix that and feel free to delete this comment – just trying to be helpful.)

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  2. Really touching. Loved the way the emotions were penned down in the story. Feedback on your writing – I noticed a few condensed words which you could certainly avoid as well as write the words for the numerics, and you could certainly use a better range of words, will just be an icing on the cake. Was a great read , keep writing. Cheers! Oh , if you could would love some feedback on my blog –

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